Rough Cut

This is the rough cut for our thriller. There are minor alterations we have agreed to change, such as;

• The soundtrack. We are planning on having the music fade out towards the end of our credits as we believe this will be more effective to what may follow. 
• Secondly the order of the two main scenes may be changed around to give our thriller more of an opening instead of jumping straight into the credits.
•  After viewing the opening we both agreed that the scenes of flashbacks would be more suited during our credit scene, rather than the suicide scene to give an insight of how much the protagonists life has changed. 
• Also we may be adding a few more joyful scenes to contrast with the story line.
• We also need to added the name of our thriller as well as our production company.

Although we want to make these changes we also will be holding a viewing of the rough cut to a small audience where we will be taking feedback on what they think is positive and negative about it. After that we will be able to edit our thriller based on the feedback and our own thoughts to make it a much better opening.