Audience feedback on our rough cut

We held a small viewing of our rough cut to a few of our As media studies peers, we asked for unstructured feedback as although asking them questions on what they thought would work we wanted to see if they could pick up on anything else.

Monica: She mentioned that the use of the prop- the collage- in our opening credits was very effective fitted in with the genre we are trying to create. Although she said that the lighting could be a little bright as sometimes you struggle to see the names of the cast and production team.

Estefano: He liked the contrast of the everyday life clips with the suicide scene, especially the contrast of the light and dark.

Mrs Bingham: She liked our use of different camera shots and movement during our credits although she agreed with Monica that they were much too dark and it would aid our project if we re-filmed them.

We have taken all of the comments on board and are going to make changes in our project to better it.